Abridged - Rough Cut No.4

Abridged (Rough Cut) No.3 With Music

Abridged (Rough Cut) No.2

What we have added:

• cut away shots
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In this rough cut we have added rough cut away shots to create more fluency within the opening. Music is yet to be added to this rough cut. 

Abridged (Rough Cut) No.1

This rough cut consists of our bones to the film including basic shots involving the main characters. Looking at this rough cut, its evidently clear that cut away shots are required. This is to create fluency to the film and makes the viewer actually believe they are watching a film. These cut away shots also set the scene.

StoryBoard

This story board was created by me

Abridged (finalised idea)

2 Characters: Kieran (20 years old)
                      Michael (60 years old)

Michael = successful businessman / very wealthy
              = depressed due to a tragic accident involving the death of his beloved wife

Kieran = criminal youth (drug dealing thug)

The film opens with the 2 characters waking up on a standard morning. We see the older man wake up first and take the picture from his bed-side table to then kiss it and spread a tear (at this point we don't know whats on the picture). A jump cut then takes place to Kieran waking up and smoking a cigarette. The images behind both of these characters will be totally different due to there difference in wealth and class. A series of jump cuts then take place between both of these characters. We then see both characters getting ready to go out. The elder gentleman goes to visit the cemetery where his wife is buried. then we see the Kieran waiting underneath dark tunnel then threatening another fellow youth (shouting at him for his money, whilst hands around his neck). we then see Michael on his hands and knees by the grave crying and praying. Jumps to Kieran doing a drug deal down and discrete alley way. Once again jumping to Michael walking depressingly down a dark path. the moment we see the characters both meet is on the bridge where they both walk past each other. The older man then waits at the peak of the bridge where he looks suspiciously like he is going to jump. Kieran walks past him and looks intrigued as to what   is up-to. Kieran makes himself hidden whilst still watching Michael until Michael moves. Michael carries on staring down over the bridge with a rather depressed look upon his face. Michael is about to jump but is then stopped my Kieran screaming "stop! get down from there man"

At this point the opening ends and a time lapse takes place of the bridge with thew water running beneath it. The title then appears above

Post Production (Abridged) Roles

Production Company - Wong Productions + JR Productions 

Distribution Company - Atko Studios 

Roles:

Screenplay - Milo 

Call Sheet - Louis

Storyboard - Tom

Director - Tom

Sound - Louis

Cinematographer - Tom

Editor - Milo (mostly)

To look for locations we will all partake.

Abridged Shot List (by Louis Rose-Fall)

No.	Type of Shot	Description	Location	Cast
1	Long Shot (Still Position)	Michael wakes up and sits on the side of his bed	Toms House	Mike
2	Close Up Shot	Michael picks up a photo and starts crying	Toms House	Mike
3	Establishing Shot/ Long Shot	Kieran wakes up and sits on the side of his bed	Milos House	Milo
4	Close Up Shot	Kieran picks up a cig and sparks it	Milos House	Milo
5	Over The Shoulder Shot	Michael doing up his tie in the mirror	Toms House	Mike
6	Over The Shoulder Shot	Kieran putting up his hood in the mirror	Milos House	Milo
7	Establishing Shot/ Long Shot  (No Movement)	Michael walking into the cemetery	Ilkley Cemetery Entrance	Mike
8	Long Shot (No Movement)	Kieran stood waiting in the tunnel	Burley Tunnel	Milo
9	Long Shot (No Movement)	Michael on his knees putting flowers on a grave	Ilkley Cemetery	Mike
10	Extreme Long Shot	Kieran– “Where the Fucks My Money?”	Burley Tunnel	Milo, Louis
11	Close Up Shot	Other character looking frightened as Kieran holds him up against a wall	Burley Tunnel	Milo, Louis

12	Long Shot (No Movement)	Michael sat on a bench	Ilkley Cemetery	Mike, Person Passing By
13	Extreme Long Shot	Person passing walking away	Ilkley Cemetery	Mike, Person Passing By
14	Long Shot	Kieran and other person walking towards each other	Langford Road Alleyway Burley	Milo, Danny
15	Close Up Shot	Kieran handing over the drugs	Langford Road Alleyway Burley	Milo, Danny
16	Long Shot	Kieran and other person walking away from each other	Langford Road Alleyway Burley	Milo, Danny
17	Establishing Shot	Kieran and Michael walking up each side of the bridge	Ilkley Stone Bridge	Mike, Milo
18	Medium Shot/ Long Shot	Michael stood looking over the bridge	Ilkley Stone Bridge	Mike, Milo
19	Long Shot	Michael stepping up over the bridge and Kieran shouting to him	Ilkley Stone Bridge	Mike, Milo
20	Medium Shot	Kieran and Michael speaking	Ilkley Stone Bridge	Mike, Milo
21	Over the Shoulder	Kieran and Michael speaking	Ilkley Stone Bridge	Mike, Milo
22	Over the Shoulder	Kieran and Michael speaking	Ilkley Stone Bridge	Mike, Milo
23	Establishing Shot	Time lapse of the bridge (film around 4:00 pm)	Ilkley Stone Bridge	No Cast

Abridged Screenplay

This is our screenplay for our film opening which was created by Milo Davis@WongProductions

Abridged Screenplay

Screenplay

Abridged

By IGS AS Media Students

POST PRODUCTION SCRIPT - 7th December 2015

Young boy: Kieran
Man: Michael

OPENING:

1. EXT: Opening montage

This opening montage will show clips of the two main actors getting up and how this part of their life, like many other aspects of their lives, is so different from each other. The montage does not include any dialogue hence the lack of a script for this part of the film.

The first shot of the montage includes the man waking up early and looking to his bedside table and picking up a picture. He sheds a tear and puts the picture down. The camera then focuses on the picture of his once happy family as he gets up to leave the room.

The second shot of the montage includes the young boy waking up in a dirty room and turns to his bedside table to find a cigarette. He sparks a cigarette and then proceeds to get up.

The 3rd shot of the montage includes the man in a nice bedroom putting on his tie whilst looking in the mirror.

The 4th shot of the montage includes Kieran looking in a dirty mirror putting his hood up.

2. EXT: Graveyard

The old man walks into the cemetery slowly. The old man is dressed in a suit, holding a bouquet of flowers and walking respectively through the cemetery towards a specific tombstone. He looks sad and depressed with his head looking down to the ground.

3. EXT: Tunnel scene

Kieran is loitering around in a tunnel located under a dual carriage way. He is looking suspicious and constantly looking both ways to see if someone is coming. He has one hand in his pocket and he is smoking a cigarette in the other. He is dressed in a full tracksuit and can be stereotypically associated as being a 'chav'.

Kieran looks left as he sees another young male enter the tunnel and walk towards Kieran. Kieran immediately throws his cigarette onto the floor and grabs the male by the neck pushing him up to the wall aggressively.

Kieran

Yo bruv where the fucks my money

Young male

*breathing heavily and stuttering*

Kieran

where the fucks my money

Young male
*breathing fast and heavy* I'll get it to you for 6 man..... Please man allow me i'm sorry

Kieran

*smiles*

4. EXT: Graveyard scene

The old man reaches the tombstone in which his wife's name is engraved. The old man takes a deep breathe and kneels down to place the bouquet on to the grave. A tear runs down the face of the old man as he closes his eyes for a moment. He then stands up and walks off with his hands in his pocket.

5. EXT: Drug deal scene

Kieran takes place in a drug deal with another young male. Kieran walks down an alleyway and very smoothly hands over a small bag of drugs whilst the other male hands him a £20 note. The two people then walk opposite ways down the alley. Kieran then emerges into a council estate in which he walks down the street.

5. EXT: Bridge scene

Kieran is walking down a bridge whilst talking on the phone and with a cigarette behind his ear. He walks past the old man who is stood looking out over the river. The boy when past him continues to look back and watch what the old man and what he is doing.

The old man then proceeds to try step up onto the edge of the bridge but fails to lift his leg up completely and stumbles back. The young boy consequently saw this and runs over to stop the man from proceeding with this suicidal intention.

Kieran

Oi! get down from there!

The End.

Ill Manors opening sequence

This is the opening sequence to Ill Manors, which in parts has a similar sort of theme to our film opening.  We have taken a few ideas out of this opening to add to ours. The theme of Ill Manors is social realism. Likewise, so is ours. Shots similar to these will be included in our opening:

This particular shot is a time-lapse, then the title appears in large block writing. We will be using the same concept but over a bridge with a running river beneath it.