Tom, your blogging has on some occasions been good but is lacking in some key areas. There’s no pitch, and no sweed, please get these on today please. Also, your prelim should have included a version where you didn’t break the 180 deg rule (you did on the version you’ve included). There’s also no analysis of openings of similar films than the one you are making. Please sort this out asap. No more lessons spent watching videos! Now that you’re in production, your planning is feeling a bit vague and I need to see more organisation and self motivation. The deadline of next Tuesday should help focus you and you need to come to me and discuss any issues that come up. Your idea is good and I’m looking forward to seeing the final product.
Tom, your blogging has on some occasions been good but is lacking in some key areas. There’s no pitch, and no sweed, please get these on today please. Also, your prelim should have included a version where you didn’t break the 180 deg rule (you did on the version you’ve included). There’s also no analysis of openings of similar films than the one you are making. Please sort this out asap. No more lessons spent watching videos! Now that you’re in production, your planning is feeling a bit vague and I need to see more organisation and self motivation. The deadline of next Tuesday should help focus you and you need to come to me and discuss any issues that come up. Your idea is good and I’m looking forward to seeing the final product.
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